Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows 死亡的聖物
Chapter 1
His (Voldemort’s) red eyes fastened 盯著upon Snape's black ones with such intensity that some of the watchers旁觀者 looked away, apparently fearful that they themselves would be scorched 燒焦by the ferocity如火焰般兇猛 of the gaze.凝視目光. Snape, however, looked calmly back into Voldemort's face and, after a moment or two, Voldemort's lipless mouth curved彎曲 into something like a smile.
學習點:
1. 如何描寫眼神間之交流，眼神如何厲害，
… red eyes fastened 盯著upon Snape's black ones
..scorched 燒焦by the ferocity如火焰般兇猛 of the gaze.凝視目光.
2.面部表情之變化
lipless mouth 字面是沒有唇的口 = 緊合著的嘴 ，可表示其人是緊張或嚴肅的樣子
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